昨天妹妹從學校拿回一堆老師改好發還的作業,
其中有份英文作業做得還不錯 
我覺得丟了可惜,留下來又麻煩,
靈機一動,何不乾脆PO到格子上當做小朋友的
成長紀錄?
妹妹的老師每週固定給小朋友大約十幾二十幾個英文單字,
稱之為 “spelling words” 小朋友不但要學會拼這些字,
還要懂得字的用法。用spelling words造句是每週固定的作業,
這是簡單的功課,還有一種比較難的作業就是把所有新學的單字
串成一篇文章,名之為 spelling story。以下就是妹妹這學期所寫的
第一個spelling story。妹妹可費了好一番功夫才寫出這個故事。
(所有藍色的字就是當週所要學的新單字)
Once upon a time, there was a girls named Ann. She lived in a forest in Florida.
She was fourteen years old. One morning, Ann had gone to the lake to fish.
She had caught her fourth fish when it started raining. Ann ran back to her house.
The farther she went, the worse the storm got. Suddenly, lightning struck a tree
in front of her
and a bunch of squirrels and bird[s] fell out. Ann ran faster & faster
as the heavy rain poured onto her
. She was getting very dirty . When she finally
got home, she dried herself next to the fire. Then she put on dry clothes and went to sleep.
The next day, it was snowing
. Ann put on her sweater and headed to the river.
The water had formed into ice so Ann had to smash the ice to get to the water
.
After she had filled her bucket she ran home, made a fire, then she put a pot
above the fire to warm it. Ann carefully put the fish in the pot, then she served her father.
He was very thirsty so Ann gave him the warm water. Then they both went to bed.
看完妹妹的故事才發現她的地理需要加強…
佛羅里達那麼暖和
,
哪裡會下雪啊 !
那兒的河水更不可能結冰滴 ~
哈哈哈~~ 












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看來,美國和台灣一樣,也開始加強"作文"嗎?台灣是最近才感覺到"作文"的重要,或許過去孩子的國語文能力實在太不OK了...也因此,目前最熱門的補習就是"作文課"!
作文大概是希望孩子有清楚的表達孩子有清楚的表達,透過文字整理想法 (就像寫blog
一樣啦)....
其實這樣的天馬行空也不錯阿....
又,我覺得她寫的很好耶!很有劇情 很精彩哩
小朋友就是要這樣...天馬行空~豐富想像力...哈~~
小朋友的時候就是要這樣隨心所欲的寫阿~
你家妹妹文筆很好耶~~
這樣不是很讚嗎
要我寫這種文章我都還寫不出來咧@@
不過我還是有點小疑問啦
妹妹很喜歡睡覺嗎?
因為結尾不是go to bed就是go to sleep
而且他還要served her father...
別打亂他的思緒
偶而讓她有個幻想吧!
佛羅里達會下雪,雖然不常見.
河水結冰的紀錄比較難找......
我還想說這個「妹妹的支持者」是誰
原來是你家林爸唷~
他應該屁股都翹起來了吧...噗
小斑馬也是一個星期十二個生字 要造三個句子和一篇故事
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